A basic animatic for our video. (Low quality due to compression issues, then re-compression during upload.)
Things I would like to change for the final:
- Transitions in the later parts of the video (esp. the "feed the whole of NZ" part, which was added to the script after the initial thumbnails.)
- Add sound effects, and possibly back ground music (to be sourced.)
- Record the proper voice over with a better quality mic.
- Some of the animation may change/be simplified to fit within our abilities in AfterEffects.
Comments from critique:
- Make the pacing snappier in places; ease in.
- Work on the "feed whole of NZ" part to make it fit better.
- Change the "Ugly Fruit" title, or make it clearer; "Ugly Fruit, pretty blah" or something.
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